Three Must Haves for Your Logline
1. State the conflict and who it’s between.
Screenplays are boring when there is not enough conflict. It’s the same with the logline. You may have a great script but your logline will bore to tears if it does not clearly bring out the conflict, the drama in your story.
There can be no drama without conflict and the conflict happens between two parties—a hero and villain. We should have a sense of who your hero is and who the villain is. What are they fighting for that is in opposition to each other?
Adding a good adjective to describe each of your main characters will add color and make your logline more compelling.
- Highlight the biggest obstacle(s) to achieving the hero’s objective.
What obstacles does the hero have to face to triumph? The greater the obstacles the more intriguing a producer will find your screenplay to be.
This, of course, should tie into the conflict between the two main characters.
- Make sure you have a hook in the logline.
Your logline should also have a hook in it, which is that thing that gives the plot a unique twist or makes the idea unique. The uniqueness of your screenplay needs to come through in your logline.
Here are a couple of sample loglines of famous movies using these tips. I’ve taken summaries of them from IMDB.com and modified them a bit.
Alien: When the crew of spacecraft Nostrum investigates a strange signal from a nearby planet, they discover it was intended as a warning and not an SOS. By then it’s too late—they have awakened a hive colony of horrific creatures and they are angry.
Legally Blonde: When a sorority queen Hawaiian Tropic girl is dumped by her blueblood boyfriend for being “too blonde,” she decides to follow him to law school to win him back. Once there, she learns she has more legal savvy than she ever imagined.
If you follow these three simple tips in your loglines, then you will dramatically improve your chances of getting your screenplay read by the right people.
At the same time you will find that you have brought out what really matters in your story.
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